You need to make your raps longer. What I heard from this one (didn't listen to it in its entirety) sounded like a young Eminem (but not entirely). Keep going man. Use whatever emotions inspire you in the most productive way, ie, anger/pissed=able to bust out lengthy content that both flows with rhythm and possesses a consistent message. I used "pissed-off" as the emotion in this message because it IS the emotion that allows me to (just) vomit out rhymes that contain both a consistent story-line (content) AND done with a rhythmic flow.
Best of luck to you kiddo.
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Tamara Imes-Nicholas about 11 years ago
You need to make your raps longer. What I heard from this one (didn't listen to it in its entirety) sounded like a young Eminem (but not entirely). Keep going man. Use whatever emotions inspire you in the most productive way, ie, anger/pissed=able to bust out lengthy content that both flows with rhythm and possesses a consistent message. I used "pissed-off" as the emotion in this message because it IS the emotion that allows me to (just) vomit out rhymes that contain both a consistent story-line (content) AND done with a rhythmic flow.
Best of luck to you kiddo.